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In Windhelm by RiverSTP In Windhelm by RiverSTP
Made her colors more vibrant and added brown hues. After escaping the Rift, she falls into old habits and steals something in Windhelm...
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RigorM0RTIS Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
this is looking very good! i think the neck length is alright but it bends a little bit strangely, maybe if the side on our right was connected a little further from the chin (which would make it a little thicker) it'd look a little better.

the environment is nice too, though i think the snow on the bridge is a tad too solid, maybe you could use one of those rougher/scattery brushes on the edges of the piles, maybe use a brush like that to add some highlighted details on it too, so it looks more like snow and less like sludge piles, y'know?

other than that, i think this is pretty well-rendered, and i also like the khajiit's markings and colors, they're very nice. does she have a name?

also:
i used to be a sneak-thief like you.... then i took an arrow in the knee...

sorry i couldn't resist haha
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RiverSTP Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the critique! (: I really appreciate it.
Her name is Eowyn, which isn't v khajiit-like but I've decided her parents probably gave it to her to help her assimilate into Skyrim (Eowyn sounds v Nordic or maybe Imperial, I thought)
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RigorM0RTIS Featured By Owner May 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
np!
interesting. i like that there's a reason behind her name being pretty unexpected for a Khajiit. it makes sense for her parents to name her something that they feel will help her fit in. so she was born in Skyrim then? it's nice seeing characters who don't necessarily originate from their race's homeland
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RiverSTP Featured By Owner May 31, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, it's funny because that wasn't intentional at all. It was just a 14 year old me randomly choosing a name that sounded cool; now I've pretty much shaped her story around her peculiar name, being caught between feeling like a Nord (who hate her race) and a khajiit (whose culture she knows nothing about).
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Rise96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
this is great :)
the style is interesting too ^^ 
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RiverSTP Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much. :D
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Rise96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Np :D
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not-really-living Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Neck is just a bit too long.
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RiverSTP Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I like to experiment with the anatomy of different races. I've always made khajiits with longer, alien-like limbs. :)
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